Kia Orana Litea! This is an awesome presentation and is has really put an impact on my commenting! This kind of reminds me of how Miss Corbett tried to teach us how to write a comment. Maybe you could help me more if you come back to my class!
You've done a good job with your slides. I can see that you are able to identify the different parts of a quality comment. That can be a bit tricky sometimes. I'm still practising how to proof read my work and check to make sure it makes sense. Do you do that with your work too?
Kia Orana Litea! This is an awesome presentation and is has really put an impact on my commenting! This kind of reminds me of how Miss Corbett tried to teach us how to write a comment. Maybe you could help me more if you come back to my class!
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Hi Litea
ReplyDeleteYou've done a good job with your slides. I can see that you are able to identify the different parts of a quality comment. That can be a bit tricky sometimes. I'm still practising how to proof read my work and check to make sure it makes sense. Do you do that with your work too?